Tuesday, September 18, 2018

Fall Creative Writing Courses, Introductory to Intensive, plus Writing Personal Stories and Writing Kid Lit

Welcome to Creative Writing
Ten weeks of discovering your creative side
Thursday afternoons, 12:45 – 2:45
September 27 – November 29, 2018
Woodside Branch of the Oakville Public Library, 1274 Rebecca St, Oakville, Ontario
 This is your chance to take up writing in a warm, supportive environment. This course will open the door to writing short stories and writing dialogue, writing in first person and writing in third person, writing just for fun and writing all kinds of things. 
You’ll get a shot of inspiration every week and an assignment to keep you going till the next class. Best of all, this class will provide a zero-pressure, totally safe setting, where your words will grow and flower.
Fee:  $176.11 plus 13% hst = $199
To reserve a spot now, email: brianhenry@sympatico.ca

Writing Personal Stories
8 weeks of sharing and writing
Thursday evenings, 7 – 9 p.m.
October 4 – November 29, 2018
Appleby United Church, 4407 Spruce Ave, Burlington, Ontario (Map here.)
If you've ever considered writing your personal stories, this course is for you. We’ll look at memoirs, travel writing, personal essays, family history ~ personal stories of all kinds. Plus, of course, we’ll work on creativity and writing technique and have fun doing it. 
Whether you want to write a book or just get your thoughts down on paper, this weekly course will get you going. We'll reveal the tricks and conventions of telling true stories, and we’ll show you how to use the techniques of the novel to recount actual events. Weekly writing exercises and friendly feedback from the instructor will help you move forward on this writing adventure. Whether you want to write for your family and friends or for a wider public, don't miss this course.
Fee:  $167.26 plus 13% hst = $189      
To reserve your spot, email: brianhenry@sympatico.ca

Author Jennifer Mook-Sang, signing bookmarks
Writing Kid Lit
 ~ Picture Books to Young Adult
Friday afternoons, October 5 – December 7, 2018 (No class Nov 2)
1:15 – 3:15 p.m.
Glenview Church, Bethlehem Room, 1 Glenview Ave, Toronto, Ontario (Map here.)
From picture books to young adult novels, this weekly course is accessible for beginners and meaty enough for advanced writers. Through lectures, in-class assignments, homework, and feedback on your writing, we’ll give you ins and outs of writing for younger readers and set you on course toward writing your own books.
We’ll have two published children’s authors as guest speakers:
Jennifer Mook-Sang grew up in Guyana and moved to Canada when she was fourteen. While reading bedtime stories to her two sons, she fell in love with picture books and decided to write one of her own. In one of Brian Henry's classes she found the beginnings of a story. That story grew into the humorous middle-grade novel Speechless, published by Scholastic in 2015. 
Speechless won the Surrey Schools Book of the Year Award, was shortlisted for many others, and was recommended by the Ontario Library Association, the Canadian Childrens’ Book Centre, the CBC, and the TD Summer Reading Club. 
Then in October 2017, Jennifer published her first picture book Captain Monty Takes the Plunge with Kids Can Press. Captain Monty is the boldest, stinkiest pirate to sail the six or seven seas; in fact, he’s never had a bath. Naturally, the Junior Library Guild immediately selected him for its fall list of recommended books. Captain Monty has also been nominated for the Rainforest of Reading Award and Jennifer will be travelling to St. Lucia for that Festival in March.
Jennifer lives in Burlington, Ontario. You can find out more about her here. 
Speechless is available online here. And Captain Monty Takes the Plunge is available here.
Author Kira Vermond
Kira Vermond is an award-winning writer with over 1,500 articles to her name. She has been a frequent contributor to the Globe and Mail, Chatelaine, CBC and Today's Parent.
Kira is the author of four nonfiction books for young readers: Half-Truths and Brazen Lies, (read more about Half-Truths here); Why We Live Where We Live (more here);   Growing Up: Inside and Out, (nominated for on Ontario Library Association Forest of Reading Award) and The Secret Life of Money: A Kid's Guide to Cash (which was my son’s and daughter’s favourite book  the year it came out, although my kids are four years apart).
Kira lives in Guelph, Ontario. 
Course fee:  $176.11 plus 13% hst = 199
To reserve your spot, email: brianhenry@sympatico.ca

Intensive Creative Writing
Ten weeks towards becoming a better writer
Offered in three locations:
Tuesday afternoons, 12:30 – 2:45 p.m.
September 25 – November 27
first reading emailed Sept 18
Appleby United Church, 4407 Spruce Ave, Burlington, Ontario (Map here.)
Wednesday evenings, 6:45 – 9:00 p.m.
September 26 – December 5 (no class Oct 31)
first reading emailed Sept 19
St. Alban's Church, 537 Main Street, Georgetown, Ontario (in the village of Glen Williams – Map here.)
Friday mornings, 10:15 – 12:30, September 28 – December 6 (No class Nov 2)
first reading emailed Sept 21
Glenview Church, Bethlehem Room
1 Glenview Ave, Toronto, Ontario (Map here.)
Intensive Creative Writing isn't for beginners; it's for people who have been writing for a while or who have done a course or two before and are working on their own projects. Over the ten weeks of classes, you’ll be asked to bring in five pieces of your writing for detailed feedback. All your pieces may be from the same work, such as a novel in progress, or they may be stand alone pieces. You bring whatever you want to work on. 
Besides critiquing pieces, the instructor will give short lectures addressing the needs of the group, and in addition to learning how to critique your own work and receiving constructive suggestions about your writing, you’ll discover that the greatest benefits come from seeing how your classmates approach and critique a piece of writing and how they write and re-write. This is a challenging course, but extremely rewarding.
Fee: $176.11 + 13% hst = $199
To reserve your spot, email: brianhenry@sympatico.ca

Instructor Brian Henry has been a book editor and creative writing instructor for more than 25 years. He publishes Quick Brown Fox, Canada's most popular blog for writers, teaches creative writing at Ryerson University and has led workshops everywhere from Boston to Buffalo and from Sarnia to Saint John. Brian is the author of a children’s version of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde (Tribute Publishing). But his proudest boast is that he’s has helped many of his students get published. 
Read a review of Brian's various courses and workshops here (and scroll down).

See Brian’s complete current schedule hereincluding writing workshops, weekly writing classes, and weekend retreats in Algonquin Park, Bolton, Barrie, Brampton, Burlington, Caledon, Collingwood, Cambridge, Georgetown, Guelph, Hamilton, Kingston, Kitchener-Waterloo, London, Midland, Mississauga, Oakville, Ottawa, Peterborough, St. Catharines, Saint John, NB, Sudbury, Toronto, Windsor, Woodstock, Halton, Muskoka, Peel, Simcoe, York Region, the GTA, Ontario and beyond.

Monday, September 17, 2018

Interview with Canadian literary agent Paige Sisley of CookeMcDermid

Heartbreaker by Claudie Dey,
represented by CookeMcDermid
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CookeMcDermid was created in 2017 by the amalgamation of two preeminent Canadian agencies, The Cooke Agency and The McDermid Agency. CookeMcDermid is a full-service literary agency representing authors of literary, commercial and speculative fiction; a broad range of narrative nonfiction; health, wellness and lifestyle resources; and middle-grade and young adult books.
CookeMcDermid represents more than 300 writers, among them Man Booker nominees, Giller and Governor General’s award–winning authors, prize-winning journalists, New York Times bestsellers and some of the literary world’s most notable names.

Paige Sisley is an associate agent at CookeMcDermid. She is currently seeking well-written commercial fiction that both entertains and has something to say, and she is always on the lookout for nonfiction in the memoir, lifestyle, and health & wellness areas. In addition to developing her own list, Paige oversees CookeMcDermid clients’ film, TV and merchandising rights and handles marketing and publicity for the agency. Previously, she was a rights assistant for Cooke International, an agency that specializes in foreign rights management for a diverse group of publishing clients.
Paige has her Master of Arts from Ryerson University's Literatures of Modernity program and a Bachelor’s degree in English from the University of King's College and Dalhousie University. A born and bred Torontonian, she loves a good adventure and has also lived in LA, New Zealand and Halifax. She's on Twitter at @paigesisley.

Paige agreed to be interviewed by Quick Brown Fox….

Quick Brown Fox: Do you have suggestions about getting manuscripts in shape before writers start the submission process?
Paige Sisley
Paige: Fiction writers should have a complete, polished manuscript ready to submit before they start querying, and they should make sure that it starts off strong. 
CookeMcDermid’s submission guidelines ask that the author only send the first four pages of their manuscript alongside their query letter. People frequently call to ask if it needs to be the first four pages or if they can send more. The right questions to be asking are “why am I not confident in the first few pages of my manuscript, and what can I do to change that?” 
Start with action. Don’t lead with your character waking up or gazing at the sky; these activities are universal, but they’re not particularly interesting. Establish the voice, key characters and ground rules of the world early on so that the reader’s questions don’t pull them out of the story. 
Nonfiction books are queried and sold on proposal, but much of the same advice applies. The full proposal should also be polished and ready to send upon request, and it must hook the reader immediately.

QBF: What sort of books are you especially looking for?
Paige: Right now I'm hungry for commercial and upmarket women's fiction. Psychological suspense and mysteries are very welcome! I love a twisty plot so long as the story is satisfying, and I'm a sucker for sharp dialogue. Bonus points if the novel is also asking difficult questions about society. I like it when the ways I think about institutions and relationships are challenged through new points of view.
Elements that particularly excite me include but are not limited to: good food writing, cults and other social phenomena, the southern US, exotic locales and travel narratives, mythology, POVs tinged with synaesthesia, fast-paced dialogue and unexpected romances.
I can point to these published novels as examples of the kind I'd love to rep: Big Little Lies by Liane Moriarty, The Seven Husbands of Evelyn Hugo by Taylor Jenkins Reid, The Interestings  by Meg Wolitzer, I Take You by Eliza Kennedy, Into the Water by Paula Hawkins, Sweetbitter by Stephanie Danler and, on the more literary end, Fates and Furies by Lauren Groff.  
I also represent nonfiction in the lifestyle, health and wellness and cookery categories, where I’m always looking for a new perspective and/or unique skill set that can help improve people’s lives – whether that’s through better food or a new mindset. For example, I’m working with a client right now who is changing the way women in particular think about aging by celebrating the power and beauty that come with time and experience. Her message is so positive and vital – I can’t wait for the book to be out in the world.

On the Up by Shilo Jones
represented by CookeMcDermid
QBF: Can you tell us about your process when you’re considering a project?
Paige: The first thing a manuscript has to do is grab me. I'm not going to know the full scope of the story until near the end, but I have to be drawn in by the first fifty pages or else I won't make it to that point; there are too many manuscripts in my queue, and most readers feel the same with so much else competing for their time and attention.

QBF: What grabs your attention when you’re reading a query letter?
Paige: A well-written summary is crucial. This should read like jacket copy, not a blow-by-blow of the plot. Agents are just booklovers shopping their inboxes instead of the local bookstore. We’re constantly searching for that tingly feeling – you know, when a book just speaks to you? The query letter’s goal is to get agents excited to request and read the full manuscript. If I’m excited, I’m reading more. 
Also, I don’t think I pay as much attention to authors’ publishing histories as some agents do, but if I’m interested in a submission then I am going to google that author and scroll through all of their social media platforms. I’m not necessarily looking at the number of followers they have or their level of engagement with the writing community, but I want to know how they carry and present themselves.   

QBF: What makes you decide to represent a manuscript?
Paige: Gut feeling is not to be underestimated in this subjective business we’re in! If the book sparks something in me, that can’t and shouldn’t be ignored. 
Next, though, I do have to think about the market. Agents sometimes fall in love with books that they don’t offer to rep because they think it will be a hard sell for whatever reason – the genre has an oversaturated market, the author’s platform isn’t big enough, etc. This is when I’ll bring my colleagues in. I’ll gauge their reaction to my pitch, and then talk through questions like: Are people buying this kind of book? Who would I submit it to? What are some appropriate comps {comparable titles}, and what do those tell me about the market?
In the end, I need to get a green light from at least one other agent at CookeMcDermid in order to be able to make an offer of representation. This team-based approach ensures that the author will feel well-supported by the agency as a whole. We know that a publisher’s in-house enthusiasm can impact how successfully a book launches, so we start building buzz within the agency and hopefully it grows from there.

QBF: Besides a great book, what else do you look for in a client?
I'm Afraid of Men by Vivek Shraya
represented by CookeMcDermid
Paige: It’s important to get along with your clients. We have to trust and respect one another in order for the relationship to work. I like to meet or at least have a call with potential clients so we can get a better sense of one another before we sign anything. 
If the client writes nonfiction books, then their platform is also important. When you claim to be an expert of some sort, you need to be able to demonstrate authority on that subject. That doesn’t necessarily mean you need to have a lot of Twitter followers, but being able to point to accreditations, publications, achievements and relationships with other key figures in the field is essential for lifestyle and prescriptive nonfiction authors. 

QBF: What writing advice do you give most to your clients?
Paige: For fiction it would have to be “show, don’t tell.” It’s a cliché for a reason! And it’s still some of the hardest advice to follow. 
Writers: every time you state something, think about whether there’s a way to demonstrate it through action instead. This will feel so much more organic and immersive for the reader. It will also eliminate distance between you and your own manuscript, forcing you to answer questions about your characters and world that you may not have considered otherwise. 
For nonfiction – at least in the categories I rep – it would be to understand what you’re promising readers, and be clear about how you will help them get there.

QBF: Can you tell us something about how you pitch to publishers.    
Paige: With passion! 
I’ve taken to drafting one-sheets for my clients’ books before I pitch them to editors. These are used internally at publishing houses and agencies to communicate important information about a book at a glance for marketing, publicity and sales purposes. They include the cover, title, author, format, print run, etc., but also, importantly, key selling points. 
How are publishers going to be talking about this book to booksellers? How are booksellers going to be talking about this book to customers? I try to anticipate that and nail down some of the key points in advance, to fuel my pitches and give editors a clear idea of how the book could be talked about in the “real world.” I find that by using the publisher’s own marketing tools at this early stage, I can better understand what they need in order to be able to build excitement and make an offer.
Each time we go out with a project, it’s to a curated list of editors we think would be a good fit based on past conversations and their recent “shopping” history. We’re always talking to editors and keeping track of who is looking for what kind of books – and sharing that information with the rest of the agency – so we can play cupid when the time comes.
If I can’t see the editor I’m submitting to in person, I’ll often call them first so they hear directly from me why I’m excited to share this particular work with them. Then I’ll follow up with my submission letter and the materials by email. 
The Winnowing by Vikki Vansickle
represented by CookeMcDermid
QBF: What would you like writers to know about the publishing industry?
Paige: The decisions agents make are, at the end of the day, informed by our knowledge of how the industry works. Publishing is effectively one long sales chain that looks like this:
The author has to “sell” the book to the agent via their query and materials. (To be clear: no money changes hands at this point. The agency gets paid strictly on commission. In other words, we don’t make money unless the author makes money.)
The agent has to “sell” the work to their coworkers to build enthusiasm and gain support (or at least we do at CookeMcDermid).
After signing an author and working with them to revise their work, the agent then tries to sell it to editors.
If an editor is interested, they in turn have to “sell” the work to their coworkers. Sales, publicity and marketing teams are often asked to weigh in at this point. 
After buying the book, the publisher’s sales department has to sell it into bookstores while the marketing and publicity teams have to “sell” it to the media.
Once the book has published, book retailers have to sell it to book buyers.
Finally, and ideally, readers of the book will feel compelled to “sell” it to other book buyers through word of mouth.
So that’s what’s going through our minds while assessing a manuscript. We know how many yeses it takes for a book to be successful, and we need to be realistic about how far we believe a manuscript can go, no matter how much we may personally love it.

QBF: What would you like to say to aspiring authors?
Paige: Decide what you want to get out of publishing your book, do your research, and figure out the best plan to get what you want. Don’t take rejection personally. Be open to constructive criticism. Taste is subjective, but publishing is a business.
We’re all just trying to get more people to read more books, and that starts with you. Please know that agents, publishers and booksellers are so grateful for the work you do. We know how hard it is, and we are very much aware that we wouldn’t have jobs that we love as much as we do without your blood, sweat and tears. And heart! So much heart. So I would also like to say: thank you.

In the subject line, you must include “Author Query,” and you're welcome to include the first 4 pages of your manuscript pasted into the query. No attachments. Please do not send any further material unless invited. Full submission guidelines here.
Read more about CookeMcDermid here.

Literary agent Stephanie Sinclair
If you’re interested in getting published, soon or somewhere down the road, don’t miss the upcoming How to Get Published workshop Saturday, Nov 17, in Mississauga with literary agent Stephanie Sinclair (see here). 
For updated listing of How to Get Published workshops see here (and scroll down).

For people interested in Writing for Children & for Young Adults, Brian Henry will lead a mini-conference with Yasemin Uçar, senior editor at Kids Can Press, children’s author Kira Vermond, and YA author Tanaz Bhathena, Saturday, Sept 22, in Oakville (see here).
Brian will also lead a Writing Kid Lit weekly course on Friday afternoons, Oct 5 – Nov 30 in Toronto (see here) and a Writing for Children & for Young Adults workshop Saturday, October 13, in Sudbury (see here).
For updated listings of Writing for Children & for Young adult workshops and for weekly Kid lit classes, see here (and scroll down).

Also coming soon: Writing and Revising, Saturday, Sept 29, in St. Catharines (see here),   How to Build Your Story, with author Hannah Mary McKinnon, Saturday, Oct 20, in Kitchener (see here), and How to Write a Bestseller with New York Times #1 bestselling author Kelley Armstrong (see here)

Two weekend writing retreats :
November at the Briars Writing Retreat, Friday, Nov 2 – Sunday, Nov 4: two nights and three precious days of writing bliss. Details here.
Algonquin Writing Retreat, Friday, May 31 – Monday, June 3, 2019: four days in the luxurious isolation of Arowhon Pines Resort to get down to some real creative growth. Details here.
In both these retreats, you’ll recharge your creative batteries and get some great writing tips – all in the supportive company of your fellow writers.

Fox kits in Algonquin
Starting soon, Brian is leading a full roster of courses, Introductory to Intensive (Details of all 6 courses here):
Welcome to Creative Writing, Thursday, afternoons, Sept 27 - Nov 9, in Oakville. See here.
Writing Personal Stories, Thursday evenings, Oct 4 – Nov 29, in Burlington. See here.
Writing Kid Lit, Friday afternoons, Oct 5 – Dec 6, in Toronto. See here.
And Intensive Creative Writing, offered in three locales:
Tuesday afternoons, Sept 25 – Dec 4 (first readings emailed Sept 18), in Burlington. See here.
Wednesday evenings Sept 26 – Dec 5 (first readings emailed Sept 19), in Georgetown. See here.
Friday mornings Sept 28 – Dec 6 (first readings emailed Sept 21), in Toronto. See here
See details of all six courses here.

To reserve a spot in any workshop, or weekly course, email brianhenry@sympatico.ca
Read reviews of Brian’s courses, retreats, and workshops here.

See Brian’s complete current schedule here including Saturday writing workshops, weekly writing classes, and weekend retreats in Algonquin Park, Alliston, Bolton, Barrie, Brampton, Burlington, Caledon, Collingwood, Georgetown, Georgina, Guelph, Hamilton, Jackson’s Point, Kitchener-Waterloo, London, Midland, Mississauga, New Tecumseth, Oakville, Ottawa, Peterborough, St. Catharines, Sudbury, Toronto, Windsor, Woodstock, Halton, Muskoka, Peel, Simcoe, York Region, the GTA, Ontario and beyond.

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